Wordwrought – One Writer's Journey

Chronicling my traditional publishing journey

  • About 2 weeks ago now, I got my first batch of edits back from Trish (my agent). It has been a pretty wild experience just realizing how much I didn’t see until it was pointed out. For example:

    Stephen King compared adverbs to Dandelions. One or two in your yard look pretty. But if you don’t keep an eye on it, it’ll get out of control and then you’ve got a whole yard covered in them. Heh. That’s the current state of the book (though I’ve got the first 8 chapters in MUCH better shape now.

    Another example, and one of the things my superagent has helped me immediately realize (and want to squash) in my writing: “Something” and “kind of” . Holy shit do I use those WAY too much. The funny thing is, I’m on a “something, kind of” slaying mission, and it’s going quite well. I’m snipping them out of the yard along with the adverbs and tossing them in the trash.

    Part of me KNOWS these things already. But I sit here like, come on, Al, how the HELL did you not see all of that when you through and did your edit?! And the answer?? … I think it has to do with the fact that my brain was so used to seeing that book and that google doc that my eyes kind of glazed over it. Holy crap I just did it again?!?!? SEE? Lemme do a strikethrough on that.

    Anyway, all of this to say, I’m starting to hit a groove and stride editing this beast now. Trish gave me some super actionable, valuable feedback. And I plan to incorporate all of it.

    It’s Friday, and I’m planning to spend a few hours tonight buried in edits once the family is all tucked in. I’m really enjoying this process. Having someone look at your work with a critical eye and show you / remind you of simple ancient writing techniques that have withstood time itself (omit needless words) has been incredibly helpful. I’m looking forward to making the book really shine, and then get it back to Trish for more feedback.

    If you ever read this at some point, Trish, and I ever get whiny down the road on future edits and projects, feel free to point me to this page πŸ˜‰ I really do enjoy it, and it’s all in the spirit of giving this book we both love the best shot for Mac and the gang to absolutely steal readers hearts.

  • It’s been a bit quiet here on the blog front, so I wanted to catch y’all up on what’s been going on since I got an agent. For those who have been following along on A Cook’s Guide to Cosmic Adventures – my serialized prequel of Mac and Garrick’s adventures prior to A Cook’s Guide to Supernatural Philadelphia, yesterday was the season 2 finale! I’ve been releasing new “episodes” every Tuesday and Thursday, pretty much non-stop, for the past two months.

    Alongside that, I’ve been editing ACGTSP one last time before handing it over to my agent Trish for her editorial guidance. As of today, I just finished the last of my edits and have sent over to her! Yay! Another milestone achieved.

    This isn’t to say I hadn’t edited the book prior to the query journey. But this is the first time I’ve looked at the book in almost 3 months. I mean, really read it start to finish. I have to say, I can’t recommend this enough if you’ve written a book yourself. Once you’re done and you’ve done a few edits you feel good with? Move on to the next project. Don’t even think about the recently completed book for a month or two (I think Stephen King suggests similar in On Writing).

    You really do come back to it with a fresh pair of eyes. There were a couple parts where I was like…”Huh…just what the hell was I trying to say there?” “That makes no sense!”

    I think it’s made for quite a few improvements. I’m still biased in my read of this just because, well, I wrote the damn thing. But it’s also what has me so excited for the next step in the process. Some people may get nervous sending their book for an edit like this, but I couldn’t be more excited. After all, someone (especially someone as awesome as Trish) is taking the time to really go over this book with a lens that says, “Is this really the best it can be?” “Is this supporting the story?” Etc.

    I’m excited for this next step (and told her so in my email this afternoon!).

    So what else is coming down the pipe? Since we hit the season 2 finale for Cosmic Adventures, I’m going to take a small hiatus from that one. I might even take tonight off from writing (I’ve been writing every single night in some fashion, even with the flu, from November 2024 onwards).

    But I’m already getting ideas for a new cozy urban fantasy novel, and I imagine by tomorrow I won’t be able to help myself…and the outlining will begin πŸ™‚

    Keep writing, writers!

  • For any aspiring writer, the Query Letter to a literary agent can be a daunting and scary thing. Especially if this is brand new territory for a writer. Once you’ve done a hundred of these (and trust me, you will if you’re serious, and not insanely lucky) you start to get good at them.

    One of the things that really helped my journey was Kevin Hearne’s (Iron Druid Chronicles, Ink and Sigil, and more) The Meat of a Query Letter. It was so darn helpful that I’m sharing it with you. In fact, I’m going to shut up about query letters because Kevin does such a damn good job at explaining them.

    What I will do, is share THE query letter that caught my agent’s (Tricia Skinner) attention, that became a full request, and an eventual offer of representation. I hope it helps you. I hope it takes away some of the mysticism surrounding a query letter and what makes one that can at least capture a couple pairs of eyes.

    Dear Tricia Skinner,

    When retired cosmic hero Marcus “Mac” Sullivan trades saving the universe for serving sandwiches, he thinks his biggest challenge will be mastering the perfect cheesesteak. He’s wrong. His magically enhanced food truck has parked him in the middle of Philadelphia’s hidden supernatural community, where vampires argue about proper blood temperature, werewolves need comfort food during transformation anxiety, and fairy courts wage passive-aggressive wars over parking spaces.

    Mac’s new life as supernatural community mediator starts simply enough: helping a lonely banshee rediscover her purpose, negotiating territorial disputes between dragon hoarders and gentrification developers, and learning that his truck’s snarky AI has strong opinions about everything from his driving to his love life. When he falls for Elena Santos, a brilliant librarian who approaches supernatural revelations with academic enthusiasm, Mac begins to believe he’s finally found where he belongs.

    But building community is harder than saving worlds. When disputes between the Fairy Courts threaten to spill into the mortal world, an ancient deity crashes the neighborhood block party, and a member of a supernatural hunting order begins asking dangerous questions, Mac must protect his chosen family…one perfectly prepared meal at a time.

    A COOK’S GUIDE TO SUPERNATURAL PHILADELPHIA is Anthony Bourdain’s Kitchen Confidential meets Dresden Files: a 92,000-word cozy urban fantasy about finding purpose after the world has been saved. If published, this would be my debut novel, the first in a planned series following Mac’s continuing adventures.

    I am Allan Kaspar…blablablabla (note: I actually did put some biography details here. That I juggle a demanding day job, with raising a beautiful family with my wife, and made sure to note that I have been writing since i was eight years old, when I was recovering from leg surgeries and discovered I could go anywhere I wanted with a pencil and some imagination)

    Thank you for your time and consideration.

    Allan Kaspar
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  • “Do you want to get an agent? Because this is how we get agents!” – Someone, somewhere…I think.

    I’m marking this day down as one I’ll never forget. Well, ok, there’s several of those in my life, and if I had to really think about it, I’d say Friday, February 6th is a day I’ll remember forever. Let me rewind the tape a bit (I’ll explain that for the non-80s/90s crowd in the room later) and tell the whole story.

    When I finished A Cook’s Guide to Supernatural Philadelphia back in July of 2025, I was on fire. This book, to me, was something really special. I knew this because the query letter flew out of me easier than sneezing. Writing the synopsis was (almost) a walk in the park. I genuinely could not wait to share this book with someone, anyone, everyone. I spent a few hard weeks on the “cutting room floor” editing, patching, and fixing (a dedicated 1.5-2 hours a night to re-reading, snipping, changing, blocking, whatever needed doing!) the book to make it the best I possibly could.

    Then, the query journey started in earnest. Now, I’m not new to queries. I’ve been writing for a long time. I sent my first query back in 2015 for my first novel (oh you sweet summer child) that is still sitting in a drawer. Of course, with future goggles on, I can see now that book needs a ton of work, but it taught me a ton! Anyway, I sent my first query letters for ACGTSP on July 16th, 2025. I hit send, stepped away from the computer, and took my youngest daughter (who I’ll refer to as “Snootz”) to a friend’s birthday party.

    About an hour later, I got an alert on my phone, “Query reply from…” … Wow. That was a quick no. Except, when I opened it, it was the agent I queried letting me know that, while they absolutely loved the book, and had zero issues with its execution, they weren’t the best fit for it, and were passing it up to a senior agent at their firm who they thought would be an awesome fit. They got back to me within minutes, said they loved the query and sample pages and wanted to read the whole thing.

    This was definitely a new step in the journey. This had never happened before, and especially so fast. I also knew how this industry worked, and knew it could be a long time before I heard anything back, so I kept writing and kept querying. Over the next few months I finished the sequel, started a third book in that series, wrote the bones of a “Cozy horror”, and kept on querying.

    Months passed. I continued querying, and wound up with about 8 requests for partials (meaning they wanted to read the first x pages) and 5 requests for full (the whole manuscript) by December. I was floored. This had never happened since I started querying other novels in 2015. This told me something that I’d been so eager to hear.

    A Cook’s Guide to Supernatural Philadelphia had something special. There was a reason I felt so strongly about this book. Then the “Thanks, but I didn’t really connect…” replies started coming in. I want to emphasize this to any writers in the future reading this: you gots to grow some thick skin.

    I’ll admit, by the end of December I was feeling kind of bummed. It felt like it might be time to shelve Mac and the gang, and try again in 2026 (I refused to give up on this book). I kept writing, spent a wonderful 2 weeks off of work with my family for the Christmas season, and just recharged my batteries. Yeah, I actually have a day job on top of all this, a wife and three daughters, and still manage to write 2 hours a night. I’ll catch up on sleep later in life πŸ™‚

    I sent out a few queries for the sequel novel for Philadelphia. I purposely wrote both books as standalones (but the sequel has some great easter eggs and nods to book 1). I started getting requests for fulls and partials for that too! It made me realize that yes, maybe Mac and the gang had something special after all. I also changed my approach to querying a bit starting in January.

    Each week, QueryTracker sends out a newsletter with Agency updates. Y’all, if you didn’t check that “Send me news…” box when you setup your account? Stop what you’re doing, and “go check that shit.” Let me explain why, and my change in strategy:

    The beginning of the year is when most agents re-open to queries. They’ve had a break. They’re ready to start the year with a bang. I started paying close attention to the announcements of agents re-opening to queries, and what they were interested in.

    That’s when I noticed in early January that Tricia Skinner was open to queries. I checked out her website, the kind of books she loved and was looking for. I saw a common thread: a love for urban fantasy. Well, the only slight issue in my head was, A Cook’s Guide to Supernatural Philadelphia is Cozy Urban Fantasy. A book I wrote out of my sheer love and obsession with Urban Fantasy, and a desperate desire to recreate the feeling I had reading Legends and Lattes by Travis Baldree for the first time. Would she like it? I hoped so, because everything about her approach, enthusiasm and tone (just from her website) instantly put her at the top of the list.

    I crossed my fingers, and shipped a query off, hoping for the best for Mac and the gang. And (as so many of you know all too well) I waited…except I didn’t wait too long.

    On January 18th, Tricia replied to me through Query Tracker that she enjoyed the sample pages, and wanted to read the whole book. I was thrilled. Something in me knew if I could just get her to read the book, that she would enjoy it. Even if it didn’t end up in an offer, I had a feeling I’d get some great feedback on the book and some ideas to make it even better.

    Fast forward to February 5th. I got another Query Tracker reply from Trisha that Thursday afternoon that she started reading the book, was 100 pages in or so, and was enjoying it! If the trend continued she’d have a decision for me soon.

    I couldn’t speak. I read it again. She…she was enjoying it?!. I read it again. Then I started bouncing (I do that a bit when I’m really excited, I can’t help it). I told my wife. She is my compass, and my center, and she shared my excitement. She’s always believed in me, and this occurrence did not come as a shock to her.

    Going to sleep that night was…challenging. But I had to, I had a lot due at work the next day, and needed to make sure I was rested to get it done. I woke up early, got myself together for work, saw my oldest daughter off to school, and then went into my office to start the day. I checked my email first, even though I knew I was being a bit unreasonable to expect a response that morning.

    Except…I wasn’t. Tricia had replied at 2:30AM(ish) Friday morning to tell me she was just about finished with the book and already knew she wanted to represent me. I screamed. I believe I screamed “Holy Shit!” My wife came in and said “She liked it?”

    Trish and I setup a call later that day. It would be our chance to ask each other questions, talk through next steps, and really, to just get a feel on “connection”. This is a partnership, one that I’ve heard is one of the most important partnerships/connections a writer will make (thanks Brandon Sanderson for your incredible free 2025 Lecture Series on writing Fantasy and Sci-fi on Youtube!).

    I never had a one hour phone call go by so quickly. Trish adored the book. I’ve never in my life heard someone absolutely rave about a book I wrote the way she did. Sharing parts and characters she loved, moments that made her laugh/tear up. Most importantly, that the book left her with a feeling of hope. That is the one thing I want for anyone that reads this book (if it sees light of day, that’s the next journey!) and to hear that from her was the most validating event of my life.

    I knew right away that Trish was the right person to represent me and help try to bring Mac’s adventures to the world. But I had some work to do that weekend:

    I had to get in touch with all the agents I queried and let them know I had an offer of representation (thank you query tracker for making this easy). I worked my way through the list, all the way back to that request for full in July (I never did hear back on that, but hey, it happens!).

    Now, Trish is the utmost professional. She recommended I let them know and give them two weeks to decide if they want to read the book and also offer representation. She didn’t want me to ever regret not getting that choice. Like, holy crap. Can you believe that?! I was so taken back in the best way with her courtesy for her fellow agents. That’s truly amazing, especially when you have something in your hands that you feel is special and that you could sell it. My decision was pretty much cemented then, and I took her up on that. I wanted to at least give that agent from back in July a chance to decide after reading the book, mainly because they were the first to ask for the full manuscript.

    This was all on Friday.

    Over the weekend, my oldest daughter (who the character Compass is partially modeled after in the book) has an opinion on pretty much everything. She’s been following along on this journey too, and she remembers my excitement back in July. But she said something that really opened my eyes: You’ve sent a couple nudges, it’s been over six months. Maybe this just isn’t the right time for them to represent you even if they do like it? Then she knocked it out of the park, “And even if other Agents offered to represent you, do you really think you’d even consider it after your phone call on Friday?”

    She was so right. I really connected with Trish. She loved my book, she understood what I was trying to do with it. I always said I wanted to sign with an agent that believes in and loves my books as much as I do. So, I spent Sunday reaching out to all of the agents again, apologizing for the sudden withdraw, thanking them profusely for their time, but also trying to save them time as well. They deal with thousands of queries/manuscripts, and they deserved their attention, because my mind and heart were made up. As all three of my daughters said by Sunday, “Team Trish, all the way!”

    As of today, February 11th, 2026 – it is official. I have an agent!!! I’ve signed with Tricia Skinner and joined Fuse Literary as a client. The first big door on this journey into traditional publishing has been opened.

    Thank you to everyone that’s been reading since the beginning. There is long road to go yet, but it’s never felt as full of hope as it does now. Stay tuned for more of my journey into traditional publishing!

    Remember Red, Hope is a good thing. And no good thing ever dies. – Andy Dufresne (Stephen King’s Rita Hayworth and Shawshank Redemption)

  • I remember first picking up The Iron Druid Chronicles and reading book 1 back in 2012, after its initial release. Eric, a good friend of mine from one of my first jobs outside of college, recommended it as something I’d really enjoy. He also mentioned this other series about a wizard living in the middle of modern day Chicago.

    Both of these sounded amazing to me, and so I bought them both. I think every writer remembers the book that blew open doors of inspiration for them. I’d call these two books absolutely foundational to a passion for a genre that has stayed with me ever since. I adore Urban Fantasy. Over time, I devoured the Iron Druid series, the Dresden Files (and am still reading that, obviously!). Then I discovered October Daye, and Seanan McGuire’s near infinite worlds of amazing.

    I’ve reached out to Kevin Hearne and Jim Butcher on the socials a couple times just thanking them for writing those damn books. I knew this was the genre I wanted to lose myself in. To write books about and make my own modern day mythos. Sitting in “the drawer” is a 3/4 finished novel that stars a certain wizard from Arthurian Legend who survived to the modern day after his fateful encounter with Morgane LeFay. He currently runs a tabletop gaming shop in a fictionalized version of Bethlehem PA. It’s a series I plan on getting back to someday.

    But all this to say, the real explosion, the real lightning strike? That occurred early in 2025 when I turned the final page on Travis Baldree’s Legend’s and Lattes. To quote Tolkien (or maybe it was C.S. Lewis) – suddenly a story came to me like lightning in a clear blue sky. What about COZY URBAN FANTASY?!?!?!!?

    I remember setting the book down, scrambling to my computer in a moment of manic adhd brain overload, and scribbling down notes in a word doc with ferocity. I didn’t go to bed until about 4:30 that morning. Scribbling down my notes with back to back episodes of Anthony Bourdain’s No Reservations playing on my “other laptop” that serves as a movie player or music player when I’m writing, I suddenly found myself with the bones of a story that had me feverishly excited. Although, I think I was coming down with the flu that weekend, so it may have just been actual fever. Anyway.

    Before I went to bed, I was determined to write the opening line of my new book before going to sleep. Before dreams and a night of unconsciousness gave my brain enough time to convince my heart “ehh it wasn’t a great line, really.”

    So, I took two seconds, and wrote the opening line for A Cook’s Guide to Supernatural Philadelphia.

    “A wise man once said: Barbeque may not be the road to world peace…but it’s a start.”

    And thus, Mac Sullivan came to life. Little did I know just how impactful this story was going to be. More on that soon πŸ™‚ when I can share.

    Also, thank you Kevin, and thank you Jim, for inspiring a writer with some of the most fun versions of our own world that I’ve ever gotten lost in. Oh, and a HUGE thank you to Seanan McGuire and the October Daye series, especially. The complicated nature of the Fae in her world. and the characters she wrote in those books have stuck with me ever since I read it.

    The three of you played a part in setting me on this path. If you ever read this some day, some how? Thanks. I really appreciate the stories you shared with readers like me πŸ™‚